Words can burn across a city like
fire. Kale heard them everywhere, people lighting sparks, speaking of the
things he’d been trying to deny. He plugged his mind and kept walking.
He was swimming in the sounds and
scents and sights of the market: boys hawking trays of shining trinkets, women
haggling the prices of fresh produce, horses dropping excrement in the road.
The stalls dotting the market-square were shaded by awnings of every color. At
each presided a vendor emphatically urging passerby to examine his wares. And
among all the clamor there were always voices speaking fearfully or mockingly
or eagerly about the idol.
“Kale!” Thella pushed through the
gap between a boy herding pigs and a rickety cart. She was wearing her
servant’s dress, its spotless white contrasting sharply with the brown sludge
pasting the cobblestones. “Have you been waiting long?”
“No, I just arrived.”
“Good. Let’s go.” She pulled him
after her into the crowd.
They jostled through the throng of
the market-square, wound the side streets, and paused for Kale to shake free
the beggar who plucked at his tunic.
“I thought you pretended to be an
idealist,” Thella dryly remarked.
“I am an idealist. That’s why I
believe people should work for their bread, not depend on the charity of
others.”
“You think everyone has the luxury
of work?” she asked. “That wasn’t the case in Shillarine.”
“That’s one thing that makes
Telenine different. Besides, Thell, even idealists have to be realistic. I
can’t feed every beggar. I can’t do everything.”
“That sounds like an excuse to do
nothing.”
As they reached their destination,
a dozen different scents tickled Kale’s nose. This was the street of the spice
sellers. In front of each stall was a table looking as if it were covered in a patched
quilt. The tables sported rows of boxes filled with seasonings: everything from
the pink, locally grown mesh to a
finely ground, yellow powder that Kale could practically taste in the air. The
bitterness of it filled his mouth, mingling with sweet and sour and salty and
all the variations from all the spices.
Kale and Thella moved from stall to
stall with their sacks, bargaining and occasionally dipping into a spice box
for something the chefs needed. A feast in the evening always meant shopping in
the morning for the servants.
Kale rummaged through a barrel of
dried peppers while Thella bargained with their owner. Then the woman suddenly
quieted. “Where’d that accent of yours come from?” Suspicion was heavy in her
voice.
Thella went rigid, and the danger
Kale smelled in the air was more potent than the scents of the spices. He
straightened slowly, laying a restraining hand on Thella’s shoulder.
“There’s nothing wrong with her
accent. Your ears are going old.”
“No, there’s something. . . she’s a
Shill, ain’t she? And those are servant clothes the two of you is wearing! The
palace is hiring Shills now!” The woman’s voice grew loud and shrill.
Kale hurled the peppers back into
their barrel, furious. “Come on, Thell. We’ll spend our coin elsewhere.”
“We don’t want your kind here!” the
woman screamed. “Murderers and thieves! Shill sorcery, raising demons and
meddling with magic. Your sort ain’t natural, twisting people’s own minds
against them! And now you’ve woken your old pagan gods again, right in front of
the king’s own eyes. Looking to conquer and slave us all, are you?”
Passerby threw startled glances as
the two stalked away, and Kale kept his hand firmly on Thella’s back till they
were a significant distance. Her eyes were flashing in a fashion he knew all
too well.
“I wanted to kill that woman,” she growled
quietly.
“That would definitely have gone a
long ways towards convincing folk that not all Shill are murdering pagans.”
Thella’s lips were a tight line. “Let’s
just leave.”
It was a silent walk back to the market
square.
Thella was brooding and Kale was
focusing on staying clear from her path, but both noticed the obvious shift around
them. Folk hurried by in the direction of the marketplace temple, murmuring
excitedly, agitatedly, but not too loudly. Streams of people were pooling into
a crowd before the temple. Thella and Kale curiously joined them.
A man was screaming from the
pedestal of Virkalek’s marble statue. And he was more than a man.
The presence surrounding him was
hard to define. He wasn’t large or small, handsome or particularly horrid. His
body was gaunt with rags hanging off of it, but his movements were defined by a
fiery, fanatical energy. Almost frantic. The glint in his eyes wasn’t quite
sane, and the eyes themselves were nestled deep in a stiff, unkempt tangle that
looked more like a nest of black wires than a beard.
“. . . you must tear down the
temples, rip asunder the lies enslaving you! The falsehoods, the blasphemies,
the desecrations! You have been deceived, but the dawning of truth is at hand,
and with it, blood! Blood, flowing in the streets! Fire, raining from the skies!
The gods themselves have decreed judgment; do not be found among the faithless
as the gods rise in retribution!”
The crowd was restless. In
peaceful, contented Telenine, men like this one did not exist. Kale watched the
faces: a few were doing their best to make it obvious that they scoffed at the
outrageous preaching, but their sneers were hollow, painted. Some folk looked
afraid. But the vast majority of the crowd was shocked; not at what they were being told to do, but at the fact
that they’d never realized before now that it was necessary. Shocked by
revelation.
And Kale, who couldn’t afford to
believe in gods, was feeling the same urges as the crowd, though he tried
denying them. Urges to destroy.
“Kale! Did you hear what I said?”
Thell jabbed his gut with her elbow. “We need to leave! Mobs like this can make
men into monsters. I’ve seen it before, in Shillarine.”
“That couldn’t happen here.” But his
voice was lost, his mind glazed with the ideas incepted there. Thella struggled
to pull him after her as she edged away from the crowd. It was simmering to a
boil.
“Your priests!” the man screamed.
“Your priests have lied to you! They are to blame, and all who follow them! But
they are only the first step! Heed my words, for I am mouthpiece of Murlack and
the gods of old! I am his voice! You are his
voice! And his voice thunders!”
And the crowd raged with the
thunder of a storm, heeding the man’s dictum.
Then the mouthpiece screamed,
“Unite against the blasphemers! Rise and overthrow! All the guilty must be
slain! And even the King who claims to love you-”
But his grasp on the crowd slipped
and his words were broken. The enraptured people stirred. The temple guards,
who’d been equally lost, shook themselves.
“Run back to your gutters, old
man!” a voice from the mob jeered. “Shill sewer scum!” The fanaticism with
which they’d been ready to follow the strange figure was now turned against
him. Cheers turned to jeers and everyone pretended that they alone hadn’t been
taken in.
A guard approached the
black-bearded man. “You’re a bigger fool than you look if you thought your
words could drive us to rebellion. Telenine loves Renaden, and it’s lucky for
your sake that you hadn’t spoken against him yet. Scram, before this crowd
tears you apart or we clasp you in irons and drag you before the King!”
“I will stand before your King soon
enough,” the scarecrow figure hissed, and the whole crowd heard him. His mad stare
skewered the guard and then slashed at the crowd, and for a long moment, there
was silence.
Kale
turned to Thell. “We can go now.”
“That’s
gracious of you,” she said in disgust.
The two
extricated themselves from the rapidly dissolving mob.
“You
see?” Kale smugly asked when they were a ways away. “Another example of
Telenine’s greatness! Anywhere else, a man making insinuations against the King
and the gods would be punished, maybe even with death. But here, not living in
fear has made the people open-minded, and they recognized and dismissed that fool
as a delusional fake.”
“What?”
Thell exploded. “Kale, that crowd was about to riot! How can you say any of
that?”
Kale
dodged a donkey cart. The two were making their way out of the market. “You’re
exaggerating,” he said. “The crowd was willing to listen to his ideas till he
spoke against our King.”
“That’s
not what I saw!” Thell shouted angrily. “I saw a crowd that was willing to do
anything. Your idealism becomes naivety, Kale, when it reaches the point where
faith in others blinds you from seeing them as capable of wrong!”
Kale
stopped walking and looked at Thell pityingly. The stream of people flowed
around them. A hawker cursed as he stumbled into Kale’s heels, nearly dropping
his baskets. Thell rolled her eyes.
“Kale,
don’t start-”
“It
must be hard, when everything reminds you of Shillarine. But I can promise:
that won’t happen here. Telenine is different.”
“Poor
little refugee, that’s all I am, isn’t it? That defines how you see me. It’s
just as bad as being called a pagan Shill by that spice-seller. I don’t want
pity! This city can burn to ashes for all I care.” She stomped away.
“I’ll
see you at the feast!” he called after her, unworried by her anger. Thell’s
fiery temper often made her like this.
Kale sauntered down the street,
enjoying the feeling of being part of his city. Warm sun massaged his back, and
the strains of a lute touched his hearing. There was no place he loved or
believed in more than Telenine, with its ideals and its promise. City of a
thousand towers, it was called, blessed by the gods themselves.
But in the back of his mind, Kale
was uneasy, and not only because of the testing that evening. He recalled words
from a history of Shillarine’s demise:
“There is nothing more dangerous than a crowd driven by fear, driven by
hatred, or driven by an idea. Especially an idea not fully understood.”
Those words would prove prophetic.
Those words would prove prophetic.
Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed this, and feel free to comment with any suggestions! If you like this blog, I'd be really appreciative if you could tell others about it. I'm a wanna-be author trying to promote myself in every venue possible.
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ReplyDeleteGreat read :D I enjoyed it. There's some pesky telling in here. Stuff like "Thell’s fiery temper often made her like this.'" -- there are better ways to show this through dialogue and emotions, rather than just telling the reader straight off. That's just one instance :)
Anyways, the story is going well, and I'm looking forward to each instalment :D
Thanks! Do you think it's too cliche to have Thell as fiery-tempered?
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